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Some people find it difficult to present a speech/presentation in the public. Therefore, it is suggested that public speaking should be taught in schools. Do you think it is important to know how to speak well? Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In modern society, I think,
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 is one of the most useful skills.
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, some people struggle to present a
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. I agree people should be taught how they speak well in schools. If some people who are not afraid speak a front of audiences in the public, They have more opportunity not only in their career but
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 in their
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. There are some of the reason why they should learn about
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, Students who good in the
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 have a higher chance
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 scholarships. Nowadays, most of the high
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 students go to universities or colleges. There are a lot of assignments including
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. If they already learnt about how they speak well in presentations, they will get good points in the subjects.
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, It will be benefits of apply scholarships.
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, Good
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 lead to promote in the workplace.
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 but
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 speak afront of many people.
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, during a job interview, if an applicant speaks very well a front of judgements, the employment will hire the person than another.
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, employees who good in
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 introduce their products or their jobs, when it is necessary, they can get a chance to promote.
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, In the recent research shows, people who have good
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, other people think they have more attractive.
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 helps relationship in people's
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 and good relations ship is one of the important things in
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. In conclusion, some people afraid to peak on many audiences. In my opinion, they should learn how to improve
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 will help them
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