In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Accommodation is one of the

first

and most essential needs of every person to have a happy life. In some countries, many believe that owning a home is much more important than renting a home. In my opinion,

this

is a harmful trend.

First

of all, for many people, the renting

house

makes them feel uncomfortable.

For example

, the landlord unilaterally terminates the rental contract ahead of schedule, the tenant may find themselves in the situation of having nowhere to live for a while.

Therefore

, owning a place provides a stable and safe environment for their family members.

Secondly

, In big cities, monthly rentals are too great plus everything is at

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xorbitant price will put a lot of pressure on them. In my opinion, many people are working around the clock to afford a

house

is more of a negative trend. To buy a

house

requires a huge amount of money, not to mention increasing taxes. So many have to work extra hours and tight their budgets in order

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save money for the

house

.

This

results in not having enough time to spend time with family and friends. People who are not economically stable yet, when thinking of

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buying

a home will make them feel anxious and pressured, even they may have cardiovascular diseases. In conclusion, I don’t completely agree with the fact that people should buy a

house

instead

of renting one.

Instead

of being confined to one

neighborhood

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, they can gain more experience when renting a

house

and have more opportunities to get attractive jobs.