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Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to their practices and customs. To what extend to you agree?

#people #person #culture #practices #customs
In the 21st century, it is become
a
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easy to
travelled
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 into any corner of the world.
This
is start
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 a new conversation that every
country
 has a different
cuture
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culture
 and lifestyle, that people should start
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adapt
culture
 or not, some people
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 that when
p
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erson visit
other
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another country
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country
 they
shoud
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should
 adapt their
culture
 and live like them. As per my point of view
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they should try to
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ew
culture
 and accept a good thing from
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. To start with
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,
that
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when
p
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erson travel to
other
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country
 if they start to adapt
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their environment
then
 it is become easy to know about that
country
 and their believe and roots.
Person
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 can enjoy the real meaning of
traveling
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 and information about that particular area.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, people
are connect
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 with local people and they
are openly talk
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 with them.
This
 is
help
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 to rid of meths about that
country
 and
culture
 because
person
 sometime
reliese
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realise
release
that is
 not real ground truth that world's think.
For instance
, world's think that for
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country
 that they would be harsh and support only their religion, but one thing from their
culture
 is that if any
person
come
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 for help to their house they have to do warm welcome and take care about that
person
 without asking about why they came to
thier
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their
 house.
This
 is the best practices to allowed people to pull them shelf from their problem without knowing to other people.
In addition
,
p
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erson can be become relax and focus
about
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 his or her life.
On the other hand
, Some people
are try
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 to show that their
culture
 or where they went has a
suprier
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superior
super
cuture
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culture
then
other
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. That strat increase the tension about people and increase
rumors
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 and evil feeling about the cultures without knowing by self. To summarize, every
country
 has
their
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 own
culture
 and roots and all of them has some good and bad thing. The
person
 can adapt the good habits and tradition to
the
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his or her life. The fusion of the
culture
 gives you
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a
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hance to make
g
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the
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ood
person
 on
thier
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their
 life and know
b
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etter understanding of the particular
country
.
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