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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a results od eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food

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The number of Fast
food
 chains is increasing, since new brands come up with new easy
food
 every day. Due to several reasons,
this
 type of resturant is becoming popular: the economic
food
, the fast service and the knowledge of the menu before getting there. The unexpensive outcomes came from a cheaper production, where animals are treated in bad conditions, without any freedom and eating chemical feed for getting fatter.
Therefore
, those drug provoke disease to clients, more often, habitual clients. As my point of view, the government has to take actions into
this
 sector to reduce the amount of clients who are searching for a cheap meal and encouring people to eat to a local bistrò of the city.
For example
, they could impose more taxes to these franchisings and give small paybacks,
such
 as 5%, to clients of slow
food
 resturants. Turning to the another side of the argument, applying
this
 method would create a reaction of fast
food
 companies and I don't know what they can do.
For instance
, they can still reduce the money for the production and give us a worse foods. There could be some aspect that I am not considering right now,
such
 a lawsuit. In conclusion, I trust the my government and I am trurly aware that they are doing as much as they can.
Moreover
, I would not exclude that fact that they have already thought about it, but they don't come up with a solution. Waiting would be always worse for people,
thus
, I want to encourge government of each state to think about a solution together,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • fast food consumption
  • higher tax
  • discourage
  • government intervention
  • tax revenue
  • health promotion programs
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • negative effects
  • healthcare
  • fast food companies
  • healthier options
  • offset the cost
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