some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern era, the world is changing a lot as compared to the past and unemployment is the biggest problem nowadays. Some people believe that it is
government
's social duty to take care of the people who don't have
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ome and job.
This
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will discuss why it is superior if the
country
's
authority
will take
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disadvantaged people.
To begin
with, there are many merits
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this
thing.
Firstly
, with the
authority
's help
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this
type of people can feel comfortable and easily focus on finding the new job
oppurtunities
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opportunities
.
Secondly
, confidence can be easily developed by the
government
and it is beneficial for the person who
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have work.
For example
, many europian
country
's
government
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already doing
this
thing to create a stable lifestyle of their locals who do not have
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ome. Mainly,
authority
can
be easily earn
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name and fame by doing
this
. Because when
other native
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will see
this
, at that time they will
also
support them.
On the contrary
,
this
thing
also
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a few drawbacks.
Moreover
, when
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overnment will do
this
it will make disadvantaged people
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easy
least
and it is not profitable for the society. Apart from
this
,
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conomy will be affected by
this
. Because
authority
have
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to release extra money for it.
Authority
can provide free skill courses to the people who do not
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have
work, so they can upgrade
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and it will
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positively to the
country
progress ratio.
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up,
this
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discussed
why it if profitable if the
government
will take care of disadvantaged people and I have fully agreed with it. Because it is beneficial for the society as well as for the
country
.
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