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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disanvantages of giving children this message?

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It is common for many cultures to tell the youth that they can get anything they want as long as they struggle enough. In
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 describe the disadvantages of
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 message. On the one hand, telling young
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 a message has some benefits.
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they will have unlimited dreams.
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 is down to young generations having the motivation that everything is possible.
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, nowadays, most of the unprivileged students in Indonesia are successful in entering
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Ivy League universities,
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 as Columbia, Stanford, and Harvard.
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,
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 kind of message can lead young
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 to be highly confident about their future. Take Jokowi,
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; he was nothing until the young version of him became a Solo Mayor (one of the cities in Indonesia) and now a president. On several occasions, he frequently mentioned that his achievement would not have happened if he did not believe in his dream and strive for it.
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, there are several drawbacks, like the tendency to blame themselves and just play it safe. These
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 will question why they fail when some
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 get what they want.
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, they tend to have low self-confidence. If
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 happens, either they will limit their opportunity by not taking any risks or, in the worst case, these young
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 will end their lives.
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, it was reported that a lot of Korean students who choose to be ordinary sellers give up on their dreams because they no longer believe in their self-worth.
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, in the worst case, young generations decided to commit suicide just because they could not enter the universities that they wished for.
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, having unlimited dreams and shaping them to have high self-esteem are the benefits of telling the
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 that they can accomplish their desired things by struggling enough.
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, it can cause some drawbacks,
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 as making them a safe player, and they will blame themselves if they are unable to get those things.
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