Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about saving endangered languages by government financial aid. While some people support the idea, my firm conviction is that there are many other areas that need the government's support more urgently.
People who advocate
this
opinion believe that protecting minority languages can have cultural benefits since language
is a way to the human culture
heritage. Replace the word
cultural
For example
, there are a small group of people who live in the Rocky mountains
and their Change the capitalization
Mountains
language
originated from the plants in the mountain. If the language
becomes extinct, we might lose some important knowledge about those plants. In other words
, we lost ancient knowledge if we lost languages.
On the other hand
, people who oppose this
view argue that the
money from taxpayers can be better utilized in other areas. Different from Remove the article
apply
language
extinction which the impact may take a long time to appear, some issues cannot wait to be solved. For example
, global warming has become more severe recently. More forest burned out this
year than ever before in California. Because of the ash in the air, people have to stay at home and the business was forced to close. Both the safety of citizens and the economy are contaminated. Therefore
, compared with language
preservation, I believe that other emergency topics should be more worthwhile the financial support from the governments.
In conclusion, we cannot ignore that preserving the imperilled language
is beneficial to Inherit the wisdom of the ancients. However
, it is not the top priority for governments to spend money on. After all, there are
still plenty of safety or economic threats waiting for them to tackle.Change the verb form
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite