Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In many countries, high school students prefer a one-year break before entering University for employment or travel.
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may have certain drawbacks in terms of the need for money and the loss of the academic year, I strongly believe that the benefits will be much more than the disadvantages.
The two main advantages of taking a year off from study to work or trip are that it broadens the mind and develops a sense of maturity among students. Linking Words
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, taking time off for work or flying helps students to gain valuable experience while engaging with various cultures, and languages. Linking Words
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, students who trip to different places, they get a chance to communicate with a different type of people and culture and Linking Words
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may improve their knowledge. Linking Words
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way, they learn a lot, which allows them to enhance their mental abilities. Linking Words
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, students become more mature when dealing with multinational companies. Linking Words
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learning experience will support in their Linking Words
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academic challenge when they enter the University.
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, taking a one-year break from studies Linking Words
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has some major disadvantages, Linking Words
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as wealth envy and failure of educational progress. After getting biweekly checks from the employer, students become addicted to the fund. Linking Words
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, they lose their interest in studies. Linking Words
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but not least, it has an effect on student educational development. It's a matter of fact that when someone begins a new task after a long pause, ultimately, its quite difficult to cope with all the challenges. it is the same for students who entered the University one year later. Linking Words
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, they fall behind with other students.
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there are some inevitable disadvantages like the desire for wage and fall of educational momentum that students can get after taking a break. I believe that the benefits of taking break outweigh its drawbacksLinking Words
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