The best way to improve children’s life is fathers and mothers attending course for parenting and child development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

new era, every single person is so busy in their

life

so they do not have extra

time

for their kids which really bad impact on children

life

. Its good for them if parents care

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their kids in a proper manner. Some people said that

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it is the best way to improve the kid's

life

if both

father

and

mother

attend the course of child

development

and I agree with

this

point of view. To begins with, parents play the best and beautiful role in children

life

because kids learn everything from their parents. If parents know more about their

kids

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development

, that would make them a great human in future.

Firstly

, the

development

courses help to know parents to nurture their kids in

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ood way because parenting

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is the

most important thing in a kids

life

.

Secondly

,

father

and

mother

get to know more about

time

spent with the kids because

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in the busy and hectic

life

, some parents can not give a

time

to their kids, which effect on kids mentally and physically progress

for example

if one kid only spent a

time

in school and home every day without their parents, that may affect on kids physically and sometimes they feel so lonely that makes pressure on mental health.

Furthermore

, child

development

course teach to

this

new generation family or parents to not

time

spent only on technology or mobile or other gadgets rather than the spent a

time

with their kids daily progress

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for instance

, some moms and dads take their kids very seriously that they always spent a

time

with them and try to play some physical activities like football or basketball etcetera.

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courses make

father

and

mother

smart so they can focus on kids carrier

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some children decide their

life

motive or goal to achieve something in small age but the main job of the parents is to help them to achieve their goal. Child

development

courses are important for every single parent whose kids small or older which clarify the motive of parents in

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ids

life

. The government should take a step and allow to make a child progress awareness camps and every single city so that every

father

and

mother

can nurture their kids more good way.