Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Some people believe that the wealthy nations should aid the poor countries by providing the basic needs like food and education while others advocate that it is

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esponsibility of the administration of the country to

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fulfil

the need of their people.

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both parties have strong justifications for their opinions, I believe

that ruling authorities

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of a particular nation are liable to provide the basic

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amenities

to its citizens.

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with, it is the sole duty of the government to make arrangements for the natives in terms of living and schooling because they are elected by the same people to make the country

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progressive

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elaborate, if the funds and charity are readily available to the governing bodies of the poorer countries, they will not pull themselves to make the better policies for their countries and

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the fate of the nation will remain in dark.

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,

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got the financial aid for the years and the ruling party members ruined the nation with corruption and the society couldn't help itself to become self-sufficient.

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, providing aids to others is unfair for the people of the rich countries as it is the

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money of the people which they hand over to the

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government

in terms of tax. To

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explain

briefly, there should be

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the

burden on the citizens of the

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world countries to pay taxes and funds to authorities unless they get no return on it,

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is absolutely

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with them.

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, an individual works hard for hours to feed his family and if the part of

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earning is taken and spent on some other

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it is unacceptable on his part.

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, in some

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circumstances

like natural disaster,

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pandemic

or war, it is

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obligatory on every human being to help the needy. To conclude, the governments of the unfortunate countries should not rely on aid and funds from strong nations,

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they should make policies and schemes for the welfare of their own citizens which will be

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beneficial

in the long run.

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, it is the basic right of every human to work for and make

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etter lifestyle for himself and his family,

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it is not good to increase the burden of taxes on the people of stable nations.