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Some people believe that in 100 years, life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?

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Scientists are in the quest of making people’s
life
 comfortable and easier. Taking
this
 into the consideration many people believe that
life
 will be more prosperous after century.
However
, some ethnic groups are uncertain about the same notion. I believe that automation would overrun
this
 world within several decades and make people’s
life
 comfortable, easier, luxurious and
therefore
 enjoyable, but natural resource might get obsolete and global warming problems will greatly arise. As technological interventions are entering into one’s
life
, they become more focused by not worrying about other
life
’s prospects.
For instance
, mobile devises help person to interact with professional as well as personal worlds.
Additionally
, it
also
 helps people to reduce their monthly activities
such
 as paying light bills, rents, and some shopkeepers payments.
Moreover
, an invention like Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning has been improving human
life
 for a couple of years. If people are getting so much ease now, I could not imagine, how
life
 would be in the
next
 100 years. On the other side, it is foreseeable that the depletion of natural resources has touched the sky and it is hard to think for the people that what will be the scenario even after 10 years.
For example
, oil consumption is so fierce nowadays that government has officially said that it will run out after 10 years. Another reason is, global warming issues
also
 climbed the limit,
this
 welcomes natural calamities and ruining regional people’s
life
. In
this
 state, uncertainty for several societies needs to take into consideration. To deduce, I can say by contemplating both the viewpoints that
life
 will surely become easier but without proper resources, it will be uncertain.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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