Some people believe that in 100 years, life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?

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Scientists are in the quest of making people’s

life

comfortable and easier. Taking

this

into the consideration many people believe that

life

will be more prosperous after century.

However

, some ethnic groups are uncertain about the same notion. I believe that automation would overrun

this

world within several decades and make people’s

life

comfortable, easier, luxurious and

therefore

enjoyable, but natural resource might get obsolete and global warming problems will greatly arise. As technological interventions are entering into one’s

life

, they become more focused by not worrying about other

life

’s prospects.

For instance

, mobile devises help person to interact with professional as well as personal worlds.

Additionally

, it

also

helps people to reduce their monthly activities

such

as paying light bills, rents, and some shopkeepers payments.

Moreover

, an invention like Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning has been improving human

life

for a couple of years. If people are getting so much ease now, I could not imagine, how

life

would be in the

100 years. On the other side, it is foreseeable that the depletion of natural resources has touched the sky and it is hard to think for the people that what will be the scenario even after 10 years.

For example

, oil consumption is so fierce nowadays that government has officially said that it will run out after 10 years. Another reason is, global warming issues

also

climbed the limit,

this

welcomes natural calamities and ruining regional people’s

life

. In

this

state, uncertainty for several societies needs to take into consideration. To deduce, I can say by contemplating both the viewpoints that

life

will surely become easier but without proper resources, it will be uncertain.

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Some people believe that in 100 years, life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It has been proved that smoking kills. In some countries it has been made illegal for people to smoke in public places except in certain areas. All countries should make these rules. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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