Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include What the gift is Why you chose it How it will be delivered

Dear Jones, I hope you are doing well.
First
, I want to congratulate you
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your new house, hopefully, it brings all the happiness and success to you. I
also
want to apologize
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not being able to attend
your
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party I was invited
for
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. As moving into a new house could have been quite tiring, while at the same time it would take you some time to adjust
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the new locality you moved into. So, to relax you a bit, I have decided to give you a music system. It has an inbuilt wide genre of songs that you can listen
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enjoy.
Also
, you can create
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playlist of your favourite songs. Another feature of
this
system is that you can connect it with your television and can make a home theatre. I know that you are very fond of
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technologies and perhaps
this
is the best give I could ever give to you according to your taste. It will help you to relax and can be your best companion even when you are alone. I have ordered it from Amazon and it will be directly delivered to your house. The delivery will take 3-4 days to reach in the evening
,
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so that you can collect it yourself being at home. I will look forward to
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you soon and hope that you
enjot
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enjoy
this
present. Yours Sincerely, Paul
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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