Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include following Where you live? The problem ? What he should do?

Dear
Mr.
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Jones, I am Paul, your tenant in apartment 17, fifth floor. I have been living here for the
last
two years. I am writing
this
letter to complain about the noise from your apartment right
next
to my door. Due to
connectivity
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of
this
residential area to the main road,
this
area is already noisy.
However
, from the time, new tenants moved
in to
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the apartment
next
to me, the noise from their condo
have
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added to more problems. The neighbours are party animals and host loud parties every other day. I have been on work from home
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few months, and
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my lack
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of sleep because of loud music played at their parties, does not let me concentrate on my work. I have tried to talk to the neighbours, but all of my efforts were in vain. I would appreciate
,
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if you could talk to your tenants so that
this
issue can be resolved as early as possible. Yours Sincerely, Paul
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