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These days many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reason that people prefer organic food? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price?

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Nowadays, the issue of different sort of
food
 is one of the important ones. Some people are considered to purchase
o
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rganic meal in spite of a high price. There are several reasons to choose
such
 products. In
this
 essay cases of
this
 choice will be analyzed and examples from my experience will be given. There is no doubt, that
food
 which grows by itself without pesticides and other chemical additives is more useful,
moreover
, it consists more not only nutrients but
also
 other useful substance,
that is
 why
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such
 meal is more recommended for everyone.
Furthermore
, in modern society, eating
such
food
 became a popular trend. Needless to say, that producing of
such
 goods requires a lot of time and efforts,
in addition
, usually it is grown either small areas or limited numbers,
that is
 why it costs so much.
On the other hand
, serial production of
food
 is
also
 popular these days,
thus
, in any case
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people have a choice between common
food
 and organic one, which have different prices. The vast majority of people do not choose especially
food
 by the sort of one but take it if it looks well and costs chipper.
However
, everyone knows that fruit and vegetables or animal
food
 which have been grown with using GMO might cause terrible diseases if you eat
such
 meal regularly,
that is
 why
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 certain people try to grow or buy products in the countryside. In conclusion, after analyzing all the advantages and disadvantages, it goes without saying, that organic
food
 ought to be bought and eaten to be healthy in spite of a price
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 because in the future we can avoid many problems with our health.
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