Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children. Others think parents needn't do that as children can read books or watch TV, movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In
this
contemporary era, the bond between parents and children is going a bit worse than the past life. While a set of people believes that parents should read out stories for their children, others believe that modern technology like TV and movies can replace them. Personally, I strongly believe that storytelling of parents games about three friends as it plays a vital role in children's development. As the former argument goes, in order to develop and maintain a better relationship among the family they must spend plenty of their leisure
time
mingling with the children by doing several activities like playing, teaching, singing lullabies and storytelling.
However
,when children listen to
such
stories they can learn many skills like language proficiency and moral values.
For example
, in my childhood days
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my grandma used to tell me stories of
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ungle and daily lives.As a child, I used to enjoy a lot hearing her stories.She taught me many lessons that are essential in one's lives and I
also
learnt how to pronounce each word through her guidance .
This
, kids are made aware of various problem-solving skills in times of certain circumstances and
therefore
,they still need the help of the parents.
On the contrary
, with the rise of technology and modernization people are busy with their works and have no
time
for their family so they will not get chances to monitor on what their children are learning about.
For instance
,once I heard about a boy who was settled overseas with his parents and they both were working.At most times, he used to stay alone and had no one to look after him.He wasted his whole
time
watching animations.Once, their school conducted a short story competition in which it was compulsory for all the children to participate in it.He had many imaginary ideas.But he couldn't express his story in words as he was very weak with his grammar and language.So he couldn't win the competition.
Similarly
, under
such
situations, young ones have no one to depend on and are overexposed to movies, cartoons and video games.Even when the books are available online,no child can read a book without knowing the language.They will not get any knowledge and creativity ideas by watching TV and
also
it is not suitable for children to stare at the computer screens for a longer duration as it results in eye strain and other eye-related diseases.
Hence
,
this
may be detrimental in the long run. To sum up, I pen down saying that it is always better for the parents to give their quality
time
to read some books to their children so as to keep in contact with each other and
also
it is
also
said that a book is a dream we hold in our hand.
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