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The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Every human in the world aspires to become a successful person. Often,
success
 is misunderstood as wealth creation. Even though wealth is an important measurement of
success
, it is not the only criteria to
measure
 it. I believe that
success
 is the
measure
 of satisfaction and
also
 fame. Many people think that
measure
 of
success
 is all about measuring how much
money
 or property you have. Of course, everybody works to earn
money
.
However
,
this
 cannot be applied in all fields.
For example
, if you have to declare a film to be hit, it should be profitable to producer, distributors and others who do
business
 in the cinema field
such
 as theatre owners or online platforms
such
 as Amazon or Netflix. Ultimately,It is the
measure
 of profit is made.
Likewise
, a
business
 which yields more dividends to the owners and investors is said as a successful
business
. Now, if you could lift an extra 5kg weight dumbell during training in the gym you feel happy and satisfied,
this
 is
also
 a
success
.
On the other hand
, consider a sportsperson . Say Messi, Ronaldinho, Sachin Tendulkar, Roger Federer and William sisters. They didn't make
money
 as Ambani brothers, Jef Bezos, Bill Gates. Still, they are considered as successful persons and an inspiration for others. It is only because the audience is very much satisfied and happy to watch them. Though, they earned very less amount of
money
 as compared to
business
 peoples. Though are equally famous as above mentioned
business
 personals. To conclude my point, not all
success
 is a
measure
 of wealth you created, some are the
measure
 of satisfaction in your work and fame you have.
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