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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Exploring the outside world beyond the earth has been one of the greatest work of mankind. There are views related to it,that exploring the space is a necessity for future generations.
However
,there is some contradiction to same, saying if we don't find any necessary outcome as part of it,it's not a useful exploration. Presently, we have seen a great deal of money and resource spent to find more about various planets beyond our Earth.
This
 is justified with the argument, that as more and more natural calamities and greenhouse issues are occurring on our mother earth , and if,for some reason, our planet becomes inhabitant for survival; we need to find some alternative in which we can survive
likewise
 our globe to lead an habitant life.
Moreover
, with the exploration in space,we get to know if there are any other organisms present.
However
,there is a certain section of society which feels the cost associated with finding new territories beyond our globe is not helpful if we don't get any fruitful end result. The same money and resources can be used for existing world issues like poverty,water crisis and child welfare.
This
 will help to improve the quality of contemporary human being. As a conclusion, we should ideally keep a bridge between both the sources. We should try and keep exploring the new nature beyond our current one as that's needed for the safety and security of our upcoming generation.
Also
, at the same time,we need to divert or keep funds to be used in solving current nature issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • astronomical costs
  • earthbound issues
  • tangible benefits
  • technological spin-offs
  • innovation
  • long-term investment
  • habitability
  • interplanetary travel
  • sustainable exploration
  • spacefaring nations
  • international collaboration
  • deep space
  • the final frontier
  • cosmic perspective
  • frontiers of science
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