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What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

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Online shopping is growing
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 like anything else. Busy timetable, lack of desire, better offer/promotion are the main reasons why people are going towards online shopping. Everybody is looking for saving time any money which leads to these situations. Now the advantages, for individuals it is very easy and relevant for them to use personal devices for online orders. The online world gives you better descriptions, review comment, better and detail specifications, promotional offer, easy exchange and sometimes better rates than
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ocal market. Companies many
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 to attract consumers by any chance, so that they can earn the profit. There ate
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lethora of disadvantages but sh0paholic attitude, buying more than needs, destroying local products, killing small local grown companies are the main one. Big online giants like Walmart, Costco, Superstore are entering a country and destroy their local business. Huge capital investment and well advertisement strategy are the key points for their achievement
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 it actually destroying small business. In order to promote local products,
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irst government should ban online shopping giants retailers,
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 media should promote local products. Special offer and attractive discounts are compulsory. Sending
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ext to individual mobile might
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options. School should educate pupils and tell them the benefits of products which are grown naturally.
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 it is a long process to change the situations but it is not impossible.
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