Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Rules and laws should form
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basis of any successful and viable
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. Rules govern how day to day activities are carried out in the
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and laws ensure that any
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deviations
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from the rules are effectively controlled. Any
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that prioritises personal freedoms
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and laws will quickly devolve into chaos as there would be no common basis on which everyone in the
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behaves. A
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that values rules and laws over everything else could potentially stagnate due to
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ack of creative outlets for its
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members
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a fine balance must be struck between rules, laws and personal freedoms.
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a model
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would have rules and laws that everyone would follow and at the same time
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there would be enough flexibility for its members to have creative outlets that allow for betterment of the
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as a whole.
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