Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

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Nowadays, advertising plays a vital role for all entrepreneurs in the world. Promoting goods or services is

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arts of the Marketing mix and many

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process to conquer new market trades. In

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auses that make advertisement effective and give my opinion about the

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ad on society. It’s a

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issue on how to enhance ad politics and make new patrons of firms. We can rely on fundamental knowledge from the basic syllabus of ´Marketing´, where we have to depict our customers via researching personal needs, preferences, targets and interests. After the investigation

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specialists can get some results and on top of that

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they can understand future patrons better compared to the past.

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, they can develop a new plan with focused ads that appeal to new clients.

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, the ´Citroen´ vehicle firm had created a new flamboyant ads company that attracted new business clients

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year. From my point of view, having excellent ads can lead to opening new branches. It has a good

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if it doesn’t contradict to law and society rules. I reckon that if a company uses aggressive promotion of some items, it will have a bad

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company. In general, people avoid intrusive services, because they don’t like when somebody imposes companies views on them.

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, it will lead to losing their sales and revenue. All in all, an excellent and detail-oriented ads approach may have a profitable

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on new consumers. Companies have to scrutinise all results before making the best decision of

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dvancement of products. (274 words)

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Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisements are a bad thing or a good thing for society?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Students who are given grades work harder than those who do not. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Some people belive that because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, while others think that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both views.