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I have received your letter yesterday regarding the disturbing noise caused by us. I am really regretful about that. As you know we have recently moved to your neighbourhood. We are currently renovating and upgrading the house furniture. The reason for the noise is caused while moving and making those huge furniture items. We are

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changing the glass windows that might have caused louder noises as all the windows and doors are open during that time. I am sincerely apologising

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for your inconvenience. I will take care now onwards to instruct the workers properly to take care and try not to disturb others.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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encourage
persuade
manipulative
unnecessary
excessive
artificial needs
desires
consumers
oversaturation
impulse buying
financial problems
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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Task 1 You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: -describe your experience -tell him why you are interested in the job -say why you think you would be suitable for the job

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?