Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and would cause a loss of culture.

English has been used widely in different parts of the
world
as lingua franca and has accepted as the official
language
by
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ultitude of countries. There are a group
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people who believe that having
such
language
is essential to minimize and possibly eradicate the
language
barrier among people from all over the
world
, while other oppose
this
notion as they think that
this
action results in diminish of culture and
identity
of people from diverse backgrounds.
This
essay will illustrate my opinion of favouring the cruciality of having one
language
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ormal
language
for the
world
.
First
and foremost,
language
is essential so that people can communicate
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each other and make things easier for
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to express their views and ideas. It helps in minimizing the possible misunderstandings and
hence
, create the possible peace and harmony. For an instance,
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nglish
language
has made it so convenient for people around the
world
to come together and exchange ideas, knowledge, skills, their feelings, emotions and almost everything. The
world
would not have been so close
otherwise
. It has helped in transforming the
world
into a global village. Some people oppose to the aforementioned notions as they have a belief that creation of
such
global village will, in turn, result in
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xtinction of one’s individual cultural
identity
and turn everyone into clones as they will not be distinct from one another.
However
,
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nglish
language
has existed for many years and it has been used in many countries as their official
language
, despite having their own unique national mother tongue. We can take India as an example, which is in fact, a country of
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yriad of cultural, religious and lingual diversity, but still
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English has been accepted there as an official
language
. And it is evident to the
world
that they have not completely abandoned their own lingual
identity
, as Indian
language
, Hindi, is still prominent and famous worldwide. But
instead
, it has made them even easier to demonstrate their culture and linguistic diversity to the
world
. To recapitulate, creating and using a universal
language
such
as English, which we already have, is actually beneficial as it helps people from different parts of the
world
to come closer and understand each other which is very necessary to create and maintain
world
’s peace and safety by diminishing misunderstandings, for which the
language
is actually created. And the belief that it will affect or kill one’s national cultural and lingual
identity
is baseless and unfounded.
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