Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behavior? Who do you think is responsible?

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nsist that society held responsible for the moral deprivation of people who have misbehaviours. In my own perspective, the culprits of

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status incoming from improper education as far as the lack of accountability of themselves.

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ssue and draw a logical conclusion.

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and foremost, it is undeniable/indisputable that proper education plays a pivotal role in sharpening and creating a well-manner and well-educated human. The fact that the misleading and not wholeheartedly understandable knowledge as far as illiteracy, disable to learn pure moral value are human beings concerned at the early circle of life. Those key factors exert

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egative impact on their mindset and live in

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four-wall room of their own values and beliefs.

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, the majority of juvenile delinquencies are almost stemmed and rooted originally from the lack of support or assistance from others like parents or blood relatives.

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, they might be suffered from

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ental illness about hyper-action or psychology

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of being haunted by the bad and terrible illusion in their imaginary for a while.

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, we should interact frequently with our relatives not only to gain

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utual understand between each other but

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figure out immediately the mental and psycho dysfunction of them.

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, the deficiency of responsibility has been witnessed widely for the time being. indeed, a part of youngsters nowadays

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their monetary temptation in companion with

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edentary lifestyle.

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inherited a huge fortune from their grandparents’ or parents’ heritage to purchase over-priced clothes or luxury car rather than self-esteem to develop themselves and satisfy with the frequent contemporary conditions.

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, after enjoying the fruit of other people had been hard-working, they are completely dependent and accustomed to the illusion of lavish life. Thereby, people should try to mingle with others and exchange the idea to find the really long-lasting values and feel the actual quality of the life through those meaningful activities. To sum up, based on the improper education and the irresponsibility of individuals are the main culprits of misconduct acts. I reaffirmed strongly that those aforementioned elements should be blamed for

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unwilling situation.