Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education?

There are two options regarding classes that students
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take. Some people say students have a right to choose courses and It is
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To begin
with, there are positive aspects that every
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take the same classes. It is much more
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to make a curriculum than focus on personalities each
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have.
In addition
, when it comes to fairness, it seems to adequate to adopt
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ame subject on
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Besides
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their needs.
On the other hand
, I am inclined to the view that students should select what they want to take outweigh the drawback. There are several reasons why I think like that.
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ubject they are interested in and they might be depressed when
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interest is ignored.
Furthermore
, some students can enhance their potential they originally have and I believe if the course same, the ability will get smaller. Some people may say they will be good in equal classes as well. I agree with that statement partly.
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success in a certain position, it is hard to insist like that. Many extraordinary people can reach to
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classes they choose. In conclusion, both ideas have advantages
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the benefits students take classes they want to listen seem to outweigh the disadvantages of
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