In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With increasing consumption of fast

food

, there are more people suffering from complex diseases.

However

, it is not necessary that the government must

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the

tax

on

such

food

. I completely disagree

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this

opinion because I believe by providing knowledge about eating

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ight

food

and by banning harmful additional ingredients from the packaged meals,

this

issue can be solved.

Firstly

, in

this

modern age,

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igh number of people of all age groups are attracted to unhealthy

food

.

This

is mainly because of the taste and

also

how authentically they are served.

However

,

this

can

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by educating the masses on how to choose the right spices and sauces to choose and which diet to follow by conducting awareness campaigns and advertisements rather than

tax

increment.

For example

, by watching advertisement

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television about which cooking oil is healthy, my sister could easily learn that using oil produced by cold compression is healthier than the chemically processed ones.

Furthermore

, the process of preparation of prepackaged

food

items consists of various unhealthy ingredients

such

as chemicals serving as acidity regulators, preservatives and artificial colours. The government must ban the use of

such

harmful additives in all marketed foods.

This

will significantly reduce the risk of diseases

such

as obesity, diabetes and

also

various type of cancers.

In contrast

, increasing the

tax

would not eradicate the inclusion of

such

harmful elements in our meals.

For example

, my friend is addicted to canned pineapples because of how juicy and sweet it tastes.

However

, over the years she developed diabetes, restricting her from favourite meals. In conclusion, I firmly believe that by imposing

tax

will not help to eradicate the issue of high consumption of fast

food

.

Instead

, by education the citizens about appropriate diet and by eliminating dangerous additives from the processed

food

, there would be lesser emergence of health hazards.