In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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With increasing consumption of fast

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, there are more people suffering from complex diseases.

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, it is not necessary that the government must

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food

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. I completely disagree

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opinion because I believe by providing knowledge about eating

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ight

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and by banning harmful additional ingredients from the packaged meals,

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issue can be solved.

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, in

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modern age,

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igh number of people of all age groups are attracted to unhealthy

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is mainly because of the taste and

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how authentically they are served.

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by educating the masses on how to choose the right spices and sauces to choose and which diet to follow by conducting awareness campaigns and advertisements rather than

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increment.

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, by watching advertisement

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television about which cooking oil is healthy, my sister could easily learn that using oil produced by cold compression is healthier than the chemically processed ones.

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, the process of preparation of prepackaged

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items consists of various unhealthy ingredients

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as chemicals serving as acidity regulators, preservatives and artificial colours. The government must ban the use of

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harmful additives in all marketed foods.

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will significantly reduce the risk of diseases

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as obesity, diabetes and

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various type of cancers.

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, increasing the

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would not eradicate the inclusion of

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harmful elements in our meals.

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, my friend is addicted to canned pineapples because of how juicy and sweet it tastes.

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, over the years she developed diabetes, restricting her from favourite meals. In conclusion, I firmly believe that by imposing

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will not help to eradicate the issue of high consumption of fast

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, by education the citizens about appropriate diet and by eliminating dangerous additives from the processed

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, there would be lesser emergence of health hazards.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Overconsumption
Chronic diseases
Obesity
Diabetes
Cardiovascular health
Sin tax
Subsidize
Affordability
Nutritional awareness
Paternalism
Socio-economic disparities
Industry lobbying
Public health initiatives
Consumer behavior
Regulatory measures
Health-conscious
Processed foods
Fiscal policy
Preventative healthcare
Behavioral economics

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