Last month you had an overseas hoiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends.
Dear Jane,
I woke up to your email where you've attached our holiday photos taken
while
I was at your place in February. I can't
express how much I have anticipated seeing these pictures, and I must confess that I am so excited to see them.
Actually, I now agree with you that Paris is the place to party and have fun. If you could remember our dinner outing with your cousins during the last
weekend of my stay, I think the photos from that night came out the best. However
, I can't
find Jenny and Clark in many of them, I think you must have skipped them from your gallery while
sending them.
Although
, the selfies I took at the lake with your phone are cute. Also
, I think the ones you took by yourself were more amazing. I can't
wait to print them out as a big collage and hang it on my living room wall. Moreover
, if you wouldn't
mind, I would love to come over again during Christmas to spend some nice time with your family.
I can't
wait to create another magical memories with you all.
Warm regards,
Moses.Submitted by peteromisakin on
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coherence cohesion
Consider reviewing your letter for occasional repetition to enhance clarity.
task achievement
Ensure all key details are included, such as expressing more specific gratitude for the effort of sending the photos.
coherence cohesion
The letter has clearly organized paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea.
task achievement
The tone is warm and friendly, suitable for a letter to friends.
coherence cohesion
The closing and greeting are very appropriate, adding a personal touch to the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite