Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing(for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage?

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umber of mistakes and frauds.

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, by tracking the activities online, these can be easily reduced.

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how the pros outweigh the cons.

Firstly

, in

this

competitive world, not all parents are able to drop their kids to classes or school.

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, by providing them with a mobile phone, the parents can conveniently keep a track of their kid's location and stay assured of their safety.

For example

, while walking back home, my younger sister lost her way and got confused. But my mother, keeping track of her location through cell phone, could easily locate her, pick her up and satisfactorily drove back home.

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, one more advantage is the use of secret security cameras in public locations.

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is highly necessary since it simplifies the task of policemen. It helps them monitor speeding vehicles, robberies and

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to find information on any mishap happened in the middle of the road.

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makes it easy to identify the person and save the innocent's life. It

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helps to gather

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for legal

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proceedings

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For example

, a robbery happened

last

night at my neighbour's house. Luckily, there were night-vision hidden security cameras on the street, that helped the policeman identify the thieves and locate where they were headed. They were quickly able to trace them. In conclusion, in

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advanced era, it is important to trace a person's activities. It saves one from fraud, helps locate our loved ones and

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eases the identification of miss-happenings in the society.

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, the advantages

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the disadvantages.