Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing(for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage?
With increasing advancement in technology, there how the pros outweigh the cons.
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, while walking back home, my younger sister lost her way and got confused. But my mother, keeping track of her location through cell phone, could easily locate her, pick her up and satisfactorily drove back home.
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