The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the most effective way to deal with the world’s environmental issues is to increase the price of

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. From my point of view,

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I agree with that measure could have some effect but far from being the best. The main reason why I believe that

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ays to solve environmental problems. Because of the fact that many people will not

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fuel

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if it has a high

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, nowadays, a huge amount of carbon dioxide emission is discharged into the atmosphere, so the

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of

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is increased. After that

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the community

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will rise and

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many people will

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public transport

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of using private transport.

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the environmental problems could not be impacted by smog, gas and so on.

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, in my opinion,

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solution is not the best way to solve the problems that we are facing today. Because

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way may not make a variety of people who stop

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fuel

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of raising the

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of

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, we could

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more alternative

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like solar energy, wind energy and so on. On top of that

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the government could enact laws to forbid that raw sewage is discharged directly into rivers, lakes and so on.

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, factories will be fined heavily if they do not obey the rules.

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, the government could encourage citizens to plant more trees, clean the beaches and so on. Not only the government but

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individuals

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help the world’s environmental problems to combat.

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of all, parents could educate their children

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how to protect the environment.

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, children should put garbage in the right place, not

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plastic and so on. On top of that

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we could propagate that we will be affected heavily if the environmental problems are not solved immediately. In conclusion, I agree with

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solution but there are other ways better. Given

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situation, it seems that we should raise public awareness about the world’s environmental problems to address.