Childhood is most important period for everybody and child learns many things during this time. Some others say child’s future and career are only built after the completion of their school. What do you think? Give examples to support.

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It is evident a fact that children can learn several aspects of
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time and can explore themselves to become a better citizen in the future.
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, it is always highly debated by a segment of society that
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ignificantly crucial time for everyone and they acquire
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lethora of new things during
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period whereas some others believe that their
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is established only after the graduation from
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. We will shed some light on both the views and will draw a logical conclusion later on. To commence with, many parents often believe that
childhood
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plays a pivotal role in the overall development of the child. They learn several important aspects of
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from their parents, teachers and friends and it allows them to explore themselves.
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, a plethora of habits
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to them by parents and teachers and
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good habits like caring, respecting,
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, etc. often
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forever that could be useful in their personal or
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life
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in the long run.
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, some children in Rose
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, teachers emphasize more on the practical skill development during the primary education apart from textbooks,
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children utilize those skills and can contribute
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uture workforce.
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,
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age is sensitive and adolescents can learn a wide amount of subjects in primary
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and can explore their interest in a particular field.
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, children can choose and plan to study as they realize about their skills and interests like mathematical calculations, space, administration, art, etc. and eventually can make a
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espective field.
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, some others opine that children’s
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is only made after the completion of
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. I believe that children are benefited better when they plan and decide about their
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since the initial phase of
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.
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, children do get a broader understanding and mature enough with the growing age.
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, teenagers who learn various skills like planning, time management, decision making
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so on during the extra co-curricular activities can implement in choosing stream
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as science, commerce and arts to make a stronger
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. In conclusion, children can learn an ample amount of skills and habits during
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childhood
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which
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them to decide and plan for making a strong
career
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in any field depending on their interests.
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