Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?
Education is a most essential factor in a
children
life. It is commonly argued that, in schools and colleges, teaching Change noun form
child's
based
on facts Add a missing verb
is based
than
applying them practically. Rephrase
rather than
This
type of educating
method commences from primary till Verb problem
teaching
the
graduation. In my opinion, I agree with the above statement as it generates Correct article usage
apply
lack
of confidence among students and there are additional Correct article usage
a lack
trainings
required to perform the actual field job.
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training
pieces of training
Firstly
, from my experience, the learning system in countries like India,
focuses more on theoretical actualities than providing an opportunity to apply them Remove the comma
apply
on
real Change preposition
in
situation
to enhance the skills of the students. Fix the agreement mistake
situations
This
methodology generates lack
of confidence among young Correct article usage
a lack
learns
to face the actual situation, once they enter Replace the word
learners
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, field training should be provided, as this
would help them to enlighten their knowledge and talents. For instance
, one who was taught the whole time based on theories and truths,
will be unable to apply them in real-time Remove the comma
apply
situation
as she or he did not have any exposure to it and Fix the agreement mistake
situations
considered
Add a missing verb
is considered
as
inexperienced. Change preposition
apply
Thus
, in order to tackle such
uncertain occurrence
, it is mandatory to have Fix the agreement mistake
occurrences
onsite-education
.
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onsite education
Secondly
, what was imparted to us throughout our life as student
in Fix the agreement mistake
students
institute
will not be enough to accomplish the job in a company. Correct article usage
an institute
In other words
, the actual requirement of an organisation to
a particular job opening will Change preposition
for
contrary
Add a missing verb
be contrary
or
will not be the same as what we learnt from the universities. Change preposition
to or
For example
, an
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if an
account
undergraduate Change the verb form
accounting
was
offered Wrong verb form
is
with
a position as an Accountant Change preposition
apply
of
a reputed company, the candidate Change preposition
at
will
not be allowed to start immediately, as they Wrong verb form
would
required
training to carry out their responsibilities in that organisation.
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require
To conclude
, I deem that, it is necessary to have field study starting from all level
of learning, as Fix the agreement mistake
levels
this
will aid to increase
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in increasing
the
self-confidence and prepare the young mind Correct article usage
apply
face
the world after their studies.Add the particle
to face
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