Tuition for healthy children usually has top priority in most countries. However, teaching students with disabilities or mental issues is more difficult and even more important to support and develop. Which viewpoint do you agree with? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?

Education is the basic right of every individual and it shouldn'
t
be discriminated on the basis of gender, colour, religion or any sort of health issues.
Therefore
, it should be spread freely to everyone.
However
, I do agree that physical or mental disable students required extra attention and
support
to establish themselves in
society
. It is very tough to pretend and remains normal in
this
society
if a child possesses some physical or mental health problems. The majority don'
t
accept them with their disabilities.
Moreover
, many teachers don,
t
show any interest to teach them with the normal kids.
Therefore
, they have to go to a special school which definitely makes them realise that they are weaker than other students.
For example
, a book named "hiccup" stated the story of a child who suffered with "Tourette" syndrome and how she was mocked by her fellow classmates and later on by her colleagues.
This
actually happens with majority of physically or mentally disabled students.
In addition
to
this
, they
also
faced the challenges of their family members. Many families are not in a state to handle the extra financial burden to raise their disabled kid.
Moreover
, in some scenarios, many family members feel ashamed with the acts of their disabled kids in
society
.
Therefore
, it becomes the duty of every section of
society
to
support
mentally disabled persons. They just need a little
support
, attention and care to accept themselves the way they are. There are many great personalities around us who were physically or mentally disabled at a point of time.
For example
, Albert Einstein had a learning disability knows as "Dyslexia" but morden physical can'
t
be imagined without his contribution. To conclude, education should be the basic right to every individual and to
support
the weaker section of the
society
must be in the behaviour of every citizen.
Therefore
, we must
support
our physically and mentally disabled kids along with
this
we must tought our normal kids to
support
the weaker children around us.
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