some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In
this
era of
world wide
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web, we get a wide range of option to choose, It could be anything or any places. While some think that we are left with minimum choices. I don't agree with
this
statement. I will explain the reasons in
this
essay. On
one
hand, we have many choices for everything in
this
world.
For example
, before we were only aware of studies
such
as maths, physics, chemistry, commerce and economics. Nowadays, there are plenty of options
such
as data science, statistics, supply chain, biotechnology, bioinformatics and various engineering streams.
Also
, there are many choices of colleges, doctors, e-commerce stores, internet plans and electronic gadgets.
On the other hand
, it is very confusing for people to select between
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various range of products or services. They have to try many options to find the most suitable
one
.
For example
, if I need a hair-cut I can see a bunch of saloons near me and find the
one
who satisfies my taste I have to try all the saloons before identifying the ideal
one
for me.
This
is applicable for all other things
such
as finding the best online course with most reviews, selecting between the best hotel for going out with friends and the best movie on Netflix. Even though having plenty of options is a big positive thing, spending more time in unsuitable things is
one
negative side of it. I don't find any reason for others saying, we are short of options. To conclude my arguments, I can say that as our society grows
further
, we get more options on almost everything. I guess that we will even replace oxygen with some other gas for breathing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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