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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do.. you agree or disagree?

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Even though a growing number of individuals rely on the web to access info
such
 as the daily bulletin, it is believed that the newspaper remains the primary channel. Growth in the field of Information technology has provided an unchallenged way of accessing any publicly available data and
therefore
, I completely disagree with the given statement. I shall
further
 elaborate my views in
this
 essay. The internet provides one of the easiest ways of acquiring the daily headlines. It is as simple as, just opening a particular website or even an application on your smartphone which has net access and read all of the news you desire to know without having to physically go around and purchase a paper-based copy. A recent survey conducted by the people's association centre of Abu Dhabi revealed that 97% of the people favoured webpage based headlines as it was easier. Another advantage that online bulletins have over their newsprint based counterparts is the ability to be real-time in nature. It is possible to have websites and apps updates with the latest developments almost as immediate as when the incident to be reported occur, whereas, in the case of a hard printed newspaper, it has to
first
 go through the entire printing procedure which is ought to be time-consuming. As an example, it is observed that a recent shooting in the city of new jersey was reported instantly on the webpage of the local news but
this
 article showed on their papers only on the following day. Due to the factors
such
 as the ease and the quickness, in my opinion, news on the net outweighs the one on paper largely.
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