Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barrett, I hope you are doing great. I just saw your advertisement on the social media account of our hometown regarding help next summer, and I am ready to help

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my availability. I can help you with window cleaning, gardening, and cooking.

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have appropriate equipment, which will help us to work more efficiently and save time. I want to do

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kind of work because right now I am a university student and a vacation is going on

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to 2 months.

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, I would utilise my time on learning new activities and doing some social work for our community; it will help me to get more socialised with the connections of good people. I am available in the evening, from 5 TO 9 PM. During the rest hours, I am busy with my routine activities, like gym, cricket, and cooking for my family. Please let me know if my availability meets your schedule. Best regards, Prit Patel

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Apr 7, 2026

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Task response: You answer all parts, but some ideas need more detail.

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Task response: Say more about why you are a good choice for this work.

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Task response: Your tone is polite, but a few lines sound a bit general.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter is easy to follow, but some sentences are too long.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use simple link words like and, also, because, but.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Keep one clear main idea in each paragraph.

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Task response: You cover help, reason, and time.

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Task response: You give clear work examples like cleaning, gardening, and cooking.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear opening and ending.

coherence and cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your paragraphs are in a good order.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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