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Government and Big companies should work together to reverse environment damage, rather than making individuals responsible for that. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is widely argued that the top industries and government should merge to process and prevent
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environmental damage, as it should not be solely an individual’s responsibility. I strongly agree with the above statement as companies and authorities are at a higher privilege in making
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ecision towards affecting the
environment
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 they should
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 initiatives for the better future. Higher authorities should take
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urden of repairing environmental conditions by improving living conditions for the current and future generations. As big brands are becoming wealthier by selling their products in the market with the support of people,
therefore
 they must benefit the society by starting initiatives like cleaning
environment
 dirt to make the survival better for tomorrow.
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, organization Nestle in India
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 regulates the drainage cleaning
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 involving its employee for one day in a year to encourage local people in the society on cleaning and hygiene needs.
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, various private sectors with the support of government takes the advantage of local resources and utilized them efficiently to make profits for the organization
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 they should support in maintaining better conditions
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 for their future as well as for the locality.
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rganization in wood business damage the forests for making furniture and these raw materials are limited in quantity and much needed in the society to have balanced air
such
 as levels of oxygen and carbon dioxide. In conclusion, authorities must spend some budget in improving the
environment
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 government and big organizations should take responsibility
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nvironment for the betterment of upcoming generations
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