In the modern world, it is no longer be necessary to use animals and animal products for food, clothing and medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion based on your knowledge and experience.

Humans have used animals for personal benefits and luxury for years. With the advent of modernization
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trend of using animals for our desires and in our everyday requirement has become redundant.
This
has become possible with the help of technology as the
use
of animal products in food, clothing and
medicine
can be substituted by other products. I believe that animals must not be harmed in any way just for the sake of our pleasure or happiness. Harming other creatures where we can substitute is cruel and it
also
affects the natural ecosystem of the planet.
Firstly
, animals are as much deserving
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living beings as humans on planet earth. When we can substitute the required products made from animals with other materials
then
animals must not be used for anybody's pleasure.
For example
, the very popular puffed jackets have substituted the dreaded crocodile skin jackets made by killing the innocent animals for the sake of fashion.
Also
, the
use
of animals in medical science in the making of any new
medicine
has been reduced with new technology substituting animals with robots.
This
type of innovative methods has deemed the
use
of animals in food,
medicine
and clothing unnecessary. Despite the cruelty in using animals in food, clothing and
medicine
some people still see
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sage of animal products justifiable.
This
is due to high demand as many people have become vegetarian and given up clothing made up of animals,
consequently
,
this
has generated a high demand with
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igh price to
use
certain animal made products,
therefore
people flaunt these products to showcase their financial status.
For instance
, the rich businessman often uses animal made products to depict their superiority.
This
cruel behaviour despite the substitute must not be promoted as it hinders the natural ecosystem of the planet. To conclude, the usage of animals in our daily needs and for our pleasure shall not be promoted as it not only hinders the natural ecosystem but
also
a terrible thing to do. In order to stop the
use
of animals where we can
use
other materials shall be strictly banned by the government to save innocent living beings from being slaughtered.
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