More and more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the opinion.

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that men are breadwinners while women should take care of chores and up bring children is no longer true in the modern era. In many places,

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convention has gone to a reverse way and an increasing number of women

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outside and men stay at home. There are several reasons for

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and I personally think that it is a positive

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. With the changes in social

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, more parents send their daughters for higher studies

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of preparing them for getting married and

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enhances the capable and educated women workforce. In many fields,

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, telemarketing, teaching, fashion design, and banking, women are doing better than men and

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has created a demand for female employees in the job market. The equal right movement has had a great impact on empowering women and

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has become quite normal for mothers to

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at offices while the fathers decide to stay at home to take care of their children.

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decision is often based on mutual understanding of the couples and the one who has the higher earning potential decides to

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to support the increasing expenses of the family.

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has been socially accepted in most of the developed countries though some developing countries in Asia are yet to completely accept

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has more positive outcomes and should be treated as

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progress. If both genders do not

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for hand in hand and do not get

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equal opportunity, the real progress would be impossible.

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ensures that we live in an era when both men and women have an equal opportunity and someone is not deprived of a great career or a big opportunity only because of her gender. It is a great chance that allows the parents to decide

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to earn money for the family and

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to take care of the family, not based on social and traditional

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. In conclusion, the changing roles in a family have been possible due to the great changes in social

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dvancement of women, especially in education and

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is a very positive

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that eliminates the gender discrimination and advocates the equal rights.