An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Scott, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am
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fine and enjoying my life as earlier as an Artist. What about Junior? Is he still remember me? What about Susan? It has been a long time since we met, I think It was Micheal’s wedding 2 years ago correct!. As you mentioned about your India tour, I am more excited to see you
anlong
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along
with family. It is a good idea to have a holiday tour to
the
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country
like India. I would suggest
south
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the south
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part of the
country
which is famous for
green
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its green
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environment,
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wildlife
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wild life
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, authentic south Indian
food
and native games. I am sure you will get
an
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unique experience in
this
state. I have a printed flyer which is published by The Kerala tourism board which consist all the information about a
Food
, hotel booking and official web portal etc. If
any
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you any
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information you need regarding anything feel free and call me at any time
also
keep one day aside for my place
Mumbai
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in Mumbai
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. I
wants
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to give you a special
marathi
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treatment which is different from other
cutures
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cultures
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It is a good idea to have a holiday tour to
the
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a
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country
like India. I would suggest
south
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the south
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part of the
country
which is famous for
green
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its green
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environment,
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wildlife
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wild life
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wildlife
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, authentic south Indian
food
and native games. I am sure you will get
an
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a
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unique experience in
this
state. I have a printed flyer which is published by The Kerala tourism board which consist all the information about a
Food
, hotel booking and official web portal etc. Waiting for you. Warm regards, Kailash Kamble
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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