A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply

Dear Tom, Hope
this
letter finds you in the best of health. I was so glad to hear that you are applying to
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Systems course at my ‘alma mater’, Singapore University. I was honoured that you reached out to me as I am always eager to help future applicants to the program I did. You will find that
this
is a highly coveted course in Singapore. Not only it teaches the usual academic lessons but
also
provides unique real-life case studies, which help students make the link between academic learning with real-world applications.
This
makes the curriculum very relevant to the professional jobs that students take after graduation.
Also
, Singapore University is widely known for
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professors, superb classroom infrastructure and a very proactive career-support team
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helps students land their dream jobs. I would recommend you check the university’s website for detailed information on how to apply.
Additionally
, you can
also
email [email protected] to get information on the application process, time taken to process the applications and any other
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you may have. The folks at the admission services are pretty friendly and I am sure you’ll get answers to most of your queries. Let me know if you need any help with your application. I’ll be more than happy to guide you. Best of luck with your application! Best Regards, Moonis
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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