Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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, there are more people starting to purchase stuff online,

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some still prefer going to the stores.

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essay will discuss why in fact positive aspects of online shopping do outweigh the negative ones. Shopping on the internet can significantly reduce

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ime spent on

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activity. In conventional stores, everything has a limited stock due to narrow storage spaces. It is very likely that on a day of sale, a person goes to a shop and comes back home with empty hands while online shopping has no

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of driving in town to find a product you need, you can click on one or two buttons and buy it in minutes with the advantage of delivery to your house, workplace or anywhere requested directly from storage depot. Less time requirement is one of the great advantages of online purchases against store shopping. Another positive aspect is the chance of a discount. Shops require employees

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egister, cleaning and organisation, whereas online stores do not. Since the costs of stores are higher due to employment and rental fees, companies are trying to direct customers into online shopping by offering discounts or special gifts per

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purchase. Customers can find the same products for more reasonable prices online than in a mall. To conclude, online shopping displays cheaper prices with just a click in the comfort of a chair

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of having to go out,

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ld-fashioned way of going to a mall.