You are attending an evening course at a college. Write a letter to the administrator of the college. 1. What do you like about the course? 2. What are some areas of improvement? 3. What is your suggestion?

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Dear Sir/Madam, My enrolment number is 45678 and I am a 3rd-year student

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MBA

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program from the evening batch at your college. I am writing

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letter to propose some suggestions for one of the modules in our course. Having Operation Management as a course in the final term

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helps us in getting an in-depth understanding of the functioning of the manufacturing as well as the production segment of an organization.

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, with

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module

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I can relate the inter-connection of all the other departments

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as Finance, Human Resource and Marketing at the firm.

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, unlike the morning batch, we do not receive any practical knowledge of

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module in the evening batch as the lecturer from the Lab is not available during

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time.

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, I would request you to please look into the matter and try if we can have a Lab teacher so as to enhance our practical knowledge in the course. I look forward to hearing from you on the way forward. Yours faithfully, Sweta Singh

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