Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.

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There is a view among eco-activists that due to the endangerment of animals there is a need to construct new wildlife sanctuaries to safeguard the fauna.
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with the positives, a significant advantage that wildlife reserve parks have is that they can protect animals that are in danger of extinction.
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is achieved by implementing restrictions for humans in specific areas of the forest.
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, the wildlife park "Vedanthangal" is a haven for various species of birds and animals.
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, the other main factors causing hazards to
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fauna are deforestation and hunting. These issues can be mitigated by bringing about hefty fines and jail time to the concerned individuals or group trespassing on these zones.
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, constructing these parks does present some problems, the most obvious being the challenges faced in maintaining these refuge areas.
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is because maintenance requires a lot of finance which is funded by the government and other eco-friendly donations. The shortage of funds can lead to improper management and
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these parks are generally open for tourists to explore by means of paid Safaris, which can compromise the safety of the animals as well as the explorers.
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is because people tend to feed the animals which can increase the chances of accidental poisoning. In conclusion, despite the benefits
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as protection and mitigation of deforestation that sanctuaries can offer, it is important to consider that they can
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecological balance
  • eco-tourism
  • wildlife conservation
  • sanctuaries
  • habitats
  • ethical concerns
  • dependency
  • preservation
  • educational opportunities
  • economic benefits
  • isolation
  • intervention
  • overcrowded
  • finite resources
  • behavioral changes
  • conservation efforts
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