In many countries schools have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Most of the institutes in many countries face
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ssue with the
behaviour
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of students. There can be many reasons behind it. In
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the possible causes behind the
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of the children.
Secondly
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the possible solution can be provided.
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with, the main reason behind the violent
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of children can be
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nfluence of social media sites, video games and movies.
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to believe that the situation created for
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entertainment purposes
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to be real, and they become very un-manageable in some conditions. They try to imitate
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similar situation which in return will create
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roblem for the
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killed
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ellow student with the pencil , because
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another
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had snatched the pencil from him.
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, there
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so much violence in
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video games so that
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tend
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to become very difficult to manage
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circumstance.
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, It is parents and teachers responsibility to take care of the
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, and should not be exposed to
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aggressive
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gressive environment. There are many technologies that have developed to monitor
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hild .
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child
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-lock can be used by the parents in televisions or computers, so the
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is not exposed to dangerous aggressive situation.
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constant monitoring from the teacher and counselling will
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help the
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to come out of extreme condition. Teachers must take care , that the children are involved in
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reative activity so that they do not get distracted. In Conclusion, I believe it is a primary
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of parents and teachers, that they are not exposed to the environment , where they tend to take
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an extreme step which will cost the future of the
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. Use of entertainment sites and video games are the main reason for the
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of the
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and minimising its use will be the better option.
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