You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to express my interest in presenting a topic on ' advanced media' seminar, which is due to take place in Germany in January 2021. I have all the data ready and approved by my Team Lead. I would

however

like to enquire about a few information that would aid in preparing for departure.

Firstly

, we have been informed that the event is happening

year, but

not

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been given the exact dates. Kindly let me know the schedule as I can begin preparing for the travel. Could you

also

possibly share the agenda of the function, as I may require to check the sound system since my presentations are in a video format.

Thirdly

and

finally

, may I check with you whether the stay will be borne by the company, or are we supposed to arrange for all expenses? If so, what would be the full itinerary? I would appreciate it if you could respond at the earliest since we have very little time ahead of us. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Peter

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