Write a letter to accommodation officer at the college to describe your situation, your problems when you are sharing room with another student, say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I'

m

writing

this

letter to inform you about the difficulties I'

m

facing in the current accommodation, and

also

requesting you to change my room. I'

m

a

3rd year

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Biology student, sharing the on-campus space in Block 1, Room no. 26 with 1st year Music students. In the

last

two years, I always got a living space with my classmates which was helpful for me to study together, and shared any concerns relating to our

studies

with my colleagues. But

this

time, I think some mistake has been made

while

assigning the rooms. Sir, I'

m

one of the toppers in my college, and in the final year of my

studies

, I need to put more effort

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getting excellent marks so that I'll get enrolled in some recognised university for higher

studies

. All three students are newcomers so they are not mature enough towards their

studies

.

Also

, their stream is arts and music, so most of their time is spent practicing the musical instruments which is the biggest hurdle in my preparation. Hoping you are able to understand my situation

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and reassign me to a room with my classmates that would assist me in concentrating on my

studies

in an effective manner. Looking for your positive response at the earliest. Yours Faithfully, Lisha Lokai