In the last 20 years, there have been significant developments in the field of information technology IT ,for example, the world wide web and communication by E-mail.However,these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future . To what extent do you agree with this view?

Many people believe
information
technology
is
booned
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boomed
booked
banned
in the
last
two decades among other developments. Even,
this
has played as a vital aid for the communication to reform as a substitute method. In
this
essay, I will discuss
about
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the merits and demerits of IT and what I state my opinion. In the
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of
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lobal access world,
the
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Information
technology
has
bring
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the automation in data's availability and many ways into the communication patterns.
This
connects the people worldwide and educates the people for numerous know-how processes.
Additionally
, there are many positive impacts, that was challenging in a past tradition. Many people who
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alone, and away from their family are felt to be disconnected.
For instance
, previously, migrants
such
as students, who
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in
n
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ew culture and new society, leaving their native place often
fells
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home sick
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. The underlying reason was due to no connectivity of email or social media. It was learned as a challenging issue limited with their sources and use of
technology
. Nowadays,
this
has overcome with the solution of emails, video calling, social media websites etc.
On the contrary
, the negative impact comes when
this
is overly used by the people and physical appearance has been replaced with the electronic system. The human touch and convincing ability of emotional intelligence
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driven by the mixer expressions in words.
Additionally
, it has provided an adverse impact on stealing the data by hackers of one's personal
information
.
Thus
, it has become vulnerable to use the essential data on the Computer device like passwords or GPS
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applications.
For instance
, in many countries, children kidnapping have become
as
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a source of leaking data
that is
designed to locate one's
peronal
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personal
information
with IP address and they get
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.
Furthermore
, it is the most negative side of
this
technology
which is emerged as a source of crime and not deemed to be beneficial for the future purpose. To conclude above, any advance technique tends to bring both as
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to the system. It is more likely to be aware, how to include
this
as the
technology
for betterment, and less usage will anyway
prevents
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unevenly use in
loosing
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the data and personal
information
.
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