Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

It is true some doctors want to

work

in cities

instead

of rural areas. Some poor areas there are not enough doctors.

Therefore

, some doctors are going to poor areas as a 'volunteer' which means most

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octors do not want to

work

in those areas. There are several reasons for that.

This

essay will explain

about

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the problem and solutions.

First

, in the poor areas, there

are

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lack of

facilites

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facilities

of medical

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and the circumstances are not clean enough.

Accordingly

, doctors are very hard to

sugery

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surgery

in

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areas. To solve

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, the

government

's role is very important. The

government

can provide some facility in the rural area which means it is

more easy

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to cure people with medical tools.

Also

, they can offer the extra

wage

for rural worked doctors.

For example

in South Korea, there

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a system for doctors. If doctors are working

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rural area, they can earn extra money over 20

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of their

wage

.

This

can encourage

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doctors to

work

outside of cities.

Secondly

, basically, there are not enough populations in rural areas. Which is not good for investing from the

government

. It is reasonable

for

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make hospitals and

provide

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tools with enough population.

Therefore

, the

government

should make local policy which is good for

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ove to rural areas. It can be helpful not only doctors

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but

also

people in the areas. If people move to

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ocal area, the local will be improved naturally.

For instance

, the developed

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villages

by the

government

became

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ity.

Therefore

, doctors are easy to cure people with improved

facilites

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facilities

. In conclusion, the

government

should offer extra

wage

and local policy for doctors. The extra

wage

can encourage the doctors to

work

in rural areas and the local policy can increase the local development. The two solutions can make synergy between doctors and

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village

.