The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your area isn’t working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter a. Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly b. Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors c. Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in order to inform you about my disappointment with respect to the way the

garbage

collection system is currently functioning in our

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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. The waste collection team has been collecting

garbage

every alternate day whereas

garbage

has to be collected on a daily basis as per our contract.

Moreover

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there are many instances where they have only been collecting

garbage

partly and have stated capacity constraints due to which they cannot carry all

garbage

bags.

This

has adversely affected the hygiene and cleanliness of our area. There are bags of

garbage

accumulated outside each house which has not only resulted in spreading a rotting smell across all the streets but has

also

caused severe air pollution across our

neighborhood

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. In order to resolve

this

issue, I would request you to please have communicated our expectations to the current team or else I would strongly recommend you to hire a new

garbage

collection vendor for our society. I look forward to hearing back from you. Regards, Sahil Saxena

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