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You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear sir, I am writing a letter regarding about
one-week
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a one-week
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 walking
tour
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 in the
mountains
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. Walking in the
mountains
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 is like my dream because
i
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I
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 really wanted to go
in
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to
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 hilly areas or on long trails. I am
intersted
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interested
 in
this
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tour
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 because
my
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a
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 lot of
freinds
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friends
 recommend
my
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me
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 to join your
tour
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.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
i
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I
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 need to know about all the
infromation
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information
 regarding
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the tour
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tour
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tours
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 like
date
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the date
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 or time so
i
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I
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 will manage my time or what is the price range and which clothes and shoes we have to wear on the
tour
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.
Moreover
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, before applying the form of
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tour
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a tour
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,
i
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I
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 am very
concern
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concerned
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 about my fitness level because
this
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 is my
first
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 time ever
to
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apply
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going on
mountains
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. It is better for me if you would recommend
my
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apply
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any diet and
exericese
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exercise
 or special training for climbing or walking
on
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in
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mountains
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the mountains
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. I hope everything would be fine when
i
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I
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 was on the
tour
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.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 faithfully Simranjeet.S
Submitted by Simranjeet Singh on

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