You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear sir, I am writing a letter regarding about

one-week

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a one-week

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walking

tour

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in the

mountains

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. Walking in the

mountains

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is like my dream because

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really wanted to go

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hilly areas or on long trails. I am

intersted

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interested

this

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tour

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because

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lot of

freinds

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friends

recommend

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to join your

tour

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Futhermore

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Furthermore

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need to know about all the

infromation

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information

regarding

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the tour

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tour

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tours

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date

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the date

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or time so

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will manage my time or what is the price range and which clothes and shoes we have to wear on the

tour

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, before applying the form of

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tour

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a tour

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am very

concern

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concerned

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about my fitness level because

this

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is my

first

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time ever

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apply

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going on

mountains

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. It is better for me if you would recommend

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apply

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any diet and

exericese

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exercise

or special training for climbing or walking

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mountains

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the mountains

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. I hope everything would be fine when

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was on the

tour

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully Simranjeet.S

Simranjeet SinghWed Dec 30 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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