Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

Dear Komal, I hope you are in good health and best of spirits. I was over the moon for asking my advice in finding a business after receiving

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letter. I have heard about one operation post opening on Indeed in one of the produce Companies named

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Burnac Produce Limited in Vaughan, ON.

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Company is looking for a supervisor with a

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minimum of

2 years of experience in

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field. The main duties include

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as creating work orders, handling workers , ensuring all GMP's rules for safety and fulfilling production with high-efficiency goals. I consider you the best candidate for

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duty because of your 5

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experience in

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department.

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, You possess all those requirements which they are looking for.

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, the location is very convenient because it is just 10 Kilometers away from your town. It is very easy to apply for

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career by searching on Google for

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warehouse. You can apply it in person or online too. If you are really interested in

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operation, apply it for as soon as possible. I wish you all the best for your future! With Love, Harpreet

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Jun 23, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

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task achievement

Try to avoid small grammar mistakes and typos, like 'minimumof' and 'operation'.

greeting and closing

The letter has a warm and friendly greeting and closing.

task achievement

You included details about the job and why it suits your friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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